The transitions in some places could use work, especially between days.

I liked the mod so far! Here's just a bit of feedback! He comes off as more of a 'relatable high school dumbass' instead of being an utter dolt like MC was sometimes in the original game. I think the modified dialogue and monologue really make the characters talk more like actual high schoolers (and removes the whole 'sounds like it's translated' thing from DDLC, which is good since this mod doesn't need that), and makes MC a lot more appealing. Of course, Sayori and Yuri mostly had their original lines, but still. Natsuki especially seemed very accurate to her original characterization, but all the characters acted exactly how they should act. I wanted some more time with Yuri, but hopefully she can play a larger role later on. Other than that, I don't have any major complaints! I really liked it! I can't help but feel like it'd be better if, but I understand that it had to be how it is for the purpose of the plot. Maybe making her say that instead would be better? Also, I don't think having them know that Yuri cuts is very good an idea. It didn't feel that much like how actual talk.

The scene with the bullies was a bit overt. Here are some notes I made playing the demo:

Doki doki literature club our time mod